Post by jack hamilton on Aug 14, 2010 0:01:43 GMT -5
Now switch to old Sport, an old stray, a ten dollar dog,
had saved Joe’s life and probably mine too!
Sport dog stayed with me for the rest of his life.
He slept on the floor in my house,
ate right by the dinner table with me and Mary Ann,
one evening I took my whole dinner,
plate and all and sat it down in front of Sport,
I really loved old sport.
He was my friend.
See! Build one aspect {scene} *
of the story till it is at a climax,
then switch to another, 1.-3.-5.-4.-2.-…
as many as needed,
build the mixed up story till the reader
does not know what is going on.
And this is a good idea during the awakening part and the hospital part.
Use the Edgar rice Burroughs
over lapping cliff hanger technique.
As long as it is all interesting,
The motorcycle dude has a wreck!
What else is new, how does at all fit?
Who is the guy with the dogs,
what’s happening?
I could keep the reader guessing till the end of the book!
Then put it all together with a masterful conclusion!
A fantastic comeback story, figuratively as well as literally!
{If I ever do come back}
This book should be interesting to every woman,
every mother, every biker, dad, people in hospitals or hurt,
coma victims, hunters, Christians, cops, lawyers,
survivors, bodybuilders, musicians, dog lovers.
Get them all interested and entertain them
with each separate scene!
{scene} I like that thanks ‘Author Debbie’,
anyway pull it all together at the end,
as it about a coma and a brain damage type injury,
so it is fitting that it is a little strange.
As long as the ending makes sense,
the more the story itself is fragmented
the more real it would seem and the more,
…well real.